Monday, September 5, 2011

baadal....

phaado`n kie chotie ke
beechon - beech
utartaa baadal
lahraata hua, bal khaata hua
tarastie aankhoun se
neeche zamein ko
ghuurta hua
dheere se keh raha tha:
mein aasman se
nikal kar
pahadiyoun kie uunchaiyoun
ko chod kar
mandraata hun
phirtaa hun, bataktaa hun,
tumhaarie aur badataa hun.
tum khaamosh
mere awaarapan kaa
nazaaraa dekhtie ho, aur
phir taras khaa kar
'barso' tum kahtie ho.
pagaloun ke tarah
mein aapa kho detaa hun
gharajtaa hun, koundtaa hun
aur phir barastaa hun.
tumhaarie andhar kie aagh
bujhataa hun, tumhe sahlaata hun.
khud ko mitaataa hun, aur
tum mein simat jaata hun.
mein tum se pyaar kartaa hun......

3 comments:

  1. Very nice. You have developed a great ability of bringing to life the extra-ordinary natural beauty that you see. In fact the surroundings look beautiful only to people who are beautiful inside. Loved the lines written by you:
    tumhe sahlaata hun.
    khud ko mitaataa hun, aur
    tum mein simat jaata hun.
    mein tum se pyaar kartaa hun...

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  2. wow!!!!!!!!!!! this is simply so pure... the way u have written this poem,, i loved it very much :) u have a great talent :) maybe u should try reaching out in other ways as well... loved the last lines... very beautiful :)

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  3. thanks sanjay and mari... i have always been eager to learn your comments... they mean a lot to me..

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